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"As previous actions during the game show the players and other people being naked in the pool, leaving the pool naked does not seem to be something that is sexy or unusual. Why is "uncaring of your state of nudity" worth mentioning, if it is normal?

You can try to rephrase and make this a different action during the pool scene or make it an alternative exit action. If you want it to be an exit action, then please put the word Exit in the Dev Title.

I do not want to influence you in your creativity but one use for this action could be, if you wanted to develop a sub-scene for the pool scene. It could then serve as the Entry action to that sub scene, e.g. "You leave the pool to spend some private time in the Sauna.". If you go for a sub-scene, then you need at least 6 "vanilla" actions (actions without kinks - except anal for m4m actions) that happen in the sauna to make it a half-way playable sub-scene. You also need to decide, whether you want to leave the pool scene on Exit of the sauna or whether you want to return to the pool. If you want to return to the pool, then you need a new "Exit Sauna" action.

Obvously, the "sauna" stands for anything you might fancy: Partner wellness, hot tub, steam room, tantra sex lessons, ... you could even consider moving to the gym scene from here - some Gyms that I know have a pool. For all of these sub scenes, this action would be a perfect entry."

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Última actualización: 19 de julio de 2026 09:23

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