If not updated for a while, I'm probably doing something else on the side...
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((I'll be back in a bit. Gotta do something real quick))
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enters Music studio
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does not notice the note
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Hello, somebody here?
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I walk through the Music Studio and check the albums at the walls. Before I enter the recording room.
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I heard steps and turn around.
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(saw you writting^^)
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Hm? I thought I heard something or someone...
I take a peek out from one of the backrooms Oh! Abby? Hey! Nice to see you this late night~
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((Yeah, I'm back now~))
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Hey Aleda, I was just walking across the streets and did pass the Studio. The lights were still on and I thought that I check who is still in the Studio.
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Why is the studio still open? Anything that you have to do before you head home?
08:07:38
Heh... you're quite the observant one, aren't ya? Yeah, it's late and shit. Sometimes still get visitors this late too. Just putting in some time recording, rehearsing, and stuff before I go to sleep. Sometimes me or other people even stay the night, which is what the retractable beds are for
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Hey Nara!
hugs back Like this one. This one is Nara
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O~O hehe, the late night visitor is me ^~^
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I check the text that we wrote and I look at the text and think for a moment before I answer. Hm yeah, I get you. I was thinking about the few lines we made, somebody the lines are not fitting very well. We have to decide if we wanna go more the comedic way or trying to do more of emotional way, like a failed relationship stuff that didn't work out. If we pick the later one. I think for the first option of your male text is fitting very well, probably could be even expanded to the second option with few extra lines. The female singer part appears a bit cruel^^, it could be maybe changed with few edit or adding extra line, like a build up story song. The other text I wrote for the male singer would fit more on the second option.
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some* = instead of somebody the lines are not fitting very well*
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Fuck, what I am talking about. * realizing that I didn't spoke what I was thinking*
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I mean your text fitted for the comedic one better, but could be expand into a emotional one.
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Fuck
realize that I actually did say what I wanted say, I'm just confused today
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Forget what I said, what I said was right.^^
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Abby's words are inconsistent. O~o
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Hmm...
A tapping of my fingers on a nearby surface is heard as I think about the options... Well, honestly, these both sound like viable options. Damn. I wonder if we can somehow combine both, but leaning slightly more towards the emotional side--could be a fun one to work on?
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Yeah, no worries~ I think I understood what you were trying to do
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Eh... it's just warming up, Nara~ No pun intended since you're a phoenix
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I sit down at the record stool and turns to Nara Yeah, sometimes stuff like this happen on certain days if have to much on my mind.
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Well, I think we should ask Nara opinion about something
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Shall we show what we wrote so far and she gives her opinion to it?
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Maybe she could add some ideas to it.
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Hey Blanc!
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That sounds like something we can do
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hey Blanc, more opinion, the better it is
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Yeah, Blanc too!
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okay, this is the text, it started as funny text:
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Female part:
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"I walked through the monday evening through the mall🎵, When I heard suddenly behind me somebody call, It was my ex-boyfriend and we meeted here on a Monday evening day, but what he didn't know is that I became gay 🎵. I had in the past no interest in cocks anymore, this is when I walked out the door. Couldn't tell him that I was into girls now..... 🎵 Yeah---ahhhh-hhaahhhh Couldn't tell that I was into girls now! 🎵 I didn't wanted be rude to him, didn't wanted break his heart, how I could tell him that I became a lesbian, he would probably perplexed like retard. 🎵 Mhhh...hhhhmmmmm..... 🎵"
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What's happening?
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the ending suck
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but it can be easily edited
08:27:30
She's showing you lyrics to a song we were working on, Blanc
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okay, now gonna show you Aleda's part:
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male singer:
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My ex girlfriend left me as if it was a trend~ She came back again~ Were we to mend?~ But what if the news was why not what I was expecting?~ What if she told me she was no longer into men?~ What would I do then?~
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O.o But without the tune, it’s impossible to imagine the finished product
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(hard to do it on EF^^)
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O~o hmmm...indeed)
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((You're gonna kinda have to just visualize it as best you can, Nara lolz))
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okay, here is the last text, I added something for the male singer part:
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male singer song part:
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Hey Babe I didn't saw you since you walked out of the door, It broke my heart and I didn't heard from you anymore. 🎵 I cried every night and listen to our song, asking myself what did I wrong. Hey Babe now I meet you here, why didn't talked to me and avoided to be near, You fucking didn't know what I made through since that night, I struggled and lived a life of fight! You ignored and ghost me like a boi, but I fucking tell you that I'm not your toy! 🎵
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(I actually have the beat in my head, but I don't know how to tell it.)^^
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Hmm... well, if you were to reword the first text again... how would you do it? Just out of curiosity~
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You mean the door and anymore line?
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or do you mean the female singer part?
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Well, I mean any part. Like... if you feel you wanna change any words of the female singer--unless, you want to leave it the way it is
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hmmmm....
thinks for a moment and checks the last lyric text with the first one.
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sips coffee in the meantime
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Hm, I'm not so good at song writing so no comment from me u.u
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>.< * I can't imagine it at all xd. The style and writing are so different from the songs I usually listen to.*
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Heh... it's okay you two! You can just hang around and see the process~
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hm, After all, I am a Chinese phoenix. It is too difficult for me to imagine English songs 😅
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(btw i m Rathia)
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((Btw, Happy Asian Heritage Month, Rathia! Even though you aren't a US Asian haha))
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^~^ happy holidays~
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Well, the meeting in the mall can probably stay if we want that scenario happen there. Imagine it as a music video, both protagonist are walking there and meeting there. If the text stays, I would say till the line text line "gay" sounds good enough, maybe even up to the door part, from there everything sucks and need to rewritten. I do consider that a girl appears next to her during the music video, the lyric with point that maybe out. Otherwise we need to change that part and rewrite most things, maybe a different scene, but my mind is more on the mall scene, like a surprise event and a third person will join during the video but not as singer, just for the visual in the video.
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the lyric will point that maybe out
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I do consider that a girl appears next to her during the music video, pointing out that the girl is in a lesbian relationship now*
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Right!
A ruffling sound is heard as I flip through a notebook Um... I do think we should keep the surprising meeting in the mall scene. Door part can most likely stay too, and the surprise girl would definitely be a twist
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Like clinging on her arm when she appears from behind, and the ex-boyfriend wonders who that girl is and why she is so close to his ex-girlfriend.
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That would be quite the visual, yeah. Hmm... maybe we can lean towards a lighter and comedic tone for that then, I wonder
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I actually had the opposite in my, the ex's emotion start boiling up and his words are getting rougher and maybe start using swearwords torwards her. From that point I do imagine that the ex-gf explains her situation in a heated way.
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I actually had the opposite in my mind*
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(forgetting words^^)
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Here's a possible compromise... contrast the tension with maybe one or two humorous lines. The ex could make a random comment about the new girl having big boobs or some shit like that
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looks at Aleda. I mean, how would you feel when somebody leaves your life without a word and you see the person suddenly in a relationship, I don't think you could remain calm.
I add
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If we really want, we could do that, but in my opinion it doesn't go well for that scenario. You need to provide me with an example, so I may change my mind and the vision you have. So I can understand the scene better you had.
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So I can understand the scene better you had in your mind.*
08:54:56
Hmm.... I see what you mean. But! Do we really wanna make it super depressing? Or maybe, at least, once he notices the new girl, he'll say a funny one liner, but then it gets a little heated as he recalls the past or whatever
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Thinks about a line that could be comedic..... and from that moment things get heated..... "Well, the only option that comes to my mind is a none lyric talk. You know, mixing up quotes with lyrics. Let me show you"
Searches for an example that I can show
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does reconsider showing it to you, since you seem opposed to depressed
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Wanna see?
09:00:50
Hmm...
takes a long sip of the coffee before setting the mug down and taking a deep breath I'm sure I've seen more depressing things, so... let's see it~
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It started as joke, but I like somehow the third text of the male singer and I wanna somehow evolve the lyric about him.
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realize that there is no lyrics, but on quotes Wrong video^^ Gonna show you a different one.
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scratches head and stifles a laugh Heh... it happens~
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found the song
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plays the video
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just listen and you will know which part I mean
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nods and gives it a listen
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it's the same singer that singed "Get you the moon" by the way
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Ah shit, I hear the quote spart
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Hits good, right?
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even if it's not part of the lyric, it's showing which situation the relationship is
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few non lyric quotes part can explain a whole relationship
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nods Hmm... maybe the ex can be like "Whoa! Your friend has big boobs--wait a minute... oh fuck! It's like that now, huh?" Something along those lines
shrugs and sips coffee once again
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wanted first oppose to your idea, but then started thinking about your words. Actually, the big boobs comment appeared first stupid, but on the other hand it's a good way to show one of the problems of the relationship. The ex-boyfriend was maybe doing all time doing stupid comments about other woman and was looking at them in a inappropriate, even if his girlfriend was around. I think, we could take this line.
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I like the lines how he realize that she is in a relationship now with somebody.
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inappropriate way*
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(forgot the word way)
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Maybe he done even worse than that.
adds
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sets the coffee mug back down after a sip I mean, it was kinda supposed to be "stupid" but in a way where it might get a chuckle or two outta the audience. And then, just as fast, it gets tense once again back to the overall depressing tone of the song. As for worse scenarios... eh... we'll see once we make more progress at some point, I guess. I feel like there's enough material to stretch out as it is... at least, for now
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makes a spin on the stool that can spins in 360 and then stretches my arms and legs Maybe you are right, I would like progress with the song text further, but we should maybe do it another time, especially it's late for you. Maybe I will think of something in the meantime and propose it to you.
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gets up and closes the laptop
09:25:29
stifles a laugh as you spin around on the stool Heh~ Yeah, no rush on working on it~ These things take time and, ya know, all that kinda shit. You have the easy part though. Fucking record label is a pain in the ass to deal with!
09:27:41
Doing a collab is a lot of paperwork~
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Feels challenged by talking my work contribution small You know that I have to provide you with the fitting beat and work on the text. I contribute at least as much you do, I have to do the recording and cheking the quality, while playing the beats and giving advise what could be improved during our record session when we record the song.
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crosses my arms
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raises an eyebrow sensing a slight argumentative tone to your words--just slightly Hmm~ Well, you do a lot of good work yourself, ya know? Are you signed to a record label too though or are you independent? Because paperworks with record labels is a pain in the ass, Abby!
sighs and looks over at you with your arms crossed Look, I'll buy you lunch or dinner or something one of these days, alright?
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Does not see a problem, paperwork is not really a job of a Rockstar. They may need to attend for the sign, but the stuff is mainly done by somebody that is doing all the paper work for them. Doesn't want this conversat turn into a argument and tries my best not comment on it. Fine smart-ass, let's go one of the coffee shops in one of the other days and get me a ginger tea.
stops crossing my arms So, what are your plans right now? Are you plan to go home right away, or do you wanna take a walk?
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(conversat = conversation*)
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Or is it something else you have to do?
I add the question
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or is there something*
09:43:36
((Hey there Electra))
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(what would be an appropriate way for me to join?)
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(different ways, maybe you are bringing coffee for Aleda, or you want get involved in the music industry, or you just wonder what kind studio it is and you found your way to check out what it's about. Or you know Aleda and wanted just visit him.)
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(or something else, it's your decision^^)
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(there is no rules how to join into the rp^^)
09:55:33
((Agreed~ Although, idk if this is the best time, Electra, since I think this is wrapping up soon and I'm prob sleeping soon too, but if you really want to jump in right now, I think I can do a quick opening later after me and Abby finish up))
09:56:13
walks in hey guys! whats going on?
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There seems to a be a brief awkward pause for a few minutes. It lasted note even a minute--and barely even a few seconds, but it was still somewhat awkward nonetheless until you spoke again with an interesting choice of words. I can't help but look to the side and stifle a laugh when you call me a "smart ass" Ah~ A ginger tea? Damn, Abby! You drive a hard bargain!~
I say with a slight smirk Here, I thought you were gonna order bubble tea or fancy sushi or some shit like that. But... ginger tea?~ You're killing me here!~
My hands go up briefly Hey, I surrender. I can't win against that. Ginger tea it is~
gives a brief nod towards you after you uncross your arms Well, we can take a walk~ I have the magical guitar, and can stop any bandits that randomly spawn~ Pfft~
extends a hand out to you as my head turns to the new visitor Oh, hey there! Have you come to get autographs from us?
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Grabs Aleda's hand and shake it, while wondering what's so funny about it going drinking tea. Well, if it's to inexpensive for you, we could add the sushi part.^^
I say with a teasing smile Also.... what kind of city is that? Bandits?
As I grabed Aleda's hand I smile at him in a teasing way and then turn may head as I noticed Electra
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(Not sure where the studio is located, if it's the City^^)
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(or if you live outside the city^^)
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((It's in the city~ Bandits was somewhat of a joke, but I can make an excuse for it happening))
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((Electra, you still there?))
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I add Gonna make the bandits dance when they appear hm....?^^ *has the images in head of bandits that are dancing in a confused way and one bandit is asking the other bandit leader: "Boss, why am I dancing, I can't stop dancing" And the bandit leader's respond: "Shut up idiot, I have no idea what is happening right now."
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I add jokingly
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rummages through the snack stash, grabbing a few bags of this and that and vanishes in unclear circumstances
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((Hi senpai fox! Bye senpai fox!))
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I give a little sigh, but still maintain a bit of a grin upon wondering if my sarcasm about the ginger tea being a hard bargain went over your head. As for the sushi... The... sushi? Oh, right! Ah... I mean, I wouldn't be against it. I do question though if you would be too greedy and eat my share of the sushi~
I give you a teasing smile in response to your own teasing smile before looking over again at where there's a visitor--or was a visitor? I could've sworn someone was there--what?
Your comment about the bandits throws me off, but I do laugh about it Ha! This is EF City, after all~ Strange things like bandits spawning outta nowhere could possibly happen! And then, they might just dance~
While still holding your hand, I raise it up and guide you into a twirling motion
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I play along as you twirl me and make a spin Oh, being in a playful mood I see.^^ But I guess there is no time of us to dance right now. I don't wanna our Rockstar collapse on the floor, because he couldn't keep up and pass out from lack of sleep.
I cling around your arm and pull you lightly, so we finally started moving out of the Studio, it's very silence, our steps can be heard as we walked through the studio. We closed every light on the Studio and started to close it, until we end up being in front of the main entrance and close the last light. Staying now outside in front of the Studio, I wait for you to close the door.
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I wait for you to lock the door with the keys.*
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There's some sounds of soft laughter as we close the studio down for the night--it's so late that the dark sky is almost giving way to the rising sun now. Once the door is locked, I put one arm around you while accidentally giving off a slight yawn Whoa~ Guess I am a bit tired, but eh~ Let's go drop you off since your place is on the way, anyway~
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Looks amused how tired you are. I actually thought dropping you off, we don't wanna anything to you happen, what I would do if this collab fails because you accidently stumble on the road and hit your poor face on the road. Without your pretty face, people wouldn't buy as much that album. Be my guest and let me escort you to your home, maybe another time you can be the one that brings me home. *I say and slithly pulled your arm in order to convince you and make you give up on your plan.
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Looks amused how tired you are. (forgot to put a "*")
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slightly pulled your arm*
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Oh?
While still hanging on to you, I tilt my head slightly as if in thought, although, the answer was already clear to me even in my quite tired state Eh, yeah, that would fuckin' suck! Can't have this collab screwed up. Not after all the paperwork with the record label involved, and... your help, of course~
When you give me a slight pull, I barely put up any resistance as if agreeing to your plan Heh... so your plan it is, then~
Holding you close for warmth on this chilly transitional period of the day from night to early sunrise, we make our way...
10:38:36
((Idk if you still wanna make a post, but I'm fine if you wanna call it scene here or whatever~))
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(I'm fine, just worried that you are to sleepy^^)
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(the decision is at your hand Mister Rockstar^^)
10:40:18
((Well, we can call this particular part a scene for now, but we can continue this in DMs if you want?))
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(Dm? hm, you gonna go sleep now?)
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((I can still go a bit, but just not for too long if that makes sense lolz))
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(poor Aleda, let's rp another time^^)
10:43:49
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(get your sleep, better than pushing yourself)
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((Heh... that might be a good course of action~ Hey, are you ok with this log being public? Asking you since you were mainly involved with it))
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I guess I do not mind.
10:45:32
((Ok~ I think it's a nice read, but yeah, anyway, I'm probably gonna sleep now then, but I'll shoot a quick DM to you. Have a good day! Was gonna say night, but I don't think it's night for you haha))
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(I hope you have a good sleep and a good day, bye^^)
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((Bye and thanks to all that watched along~))
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** Aleda (Disasterology) left the game (definitively). **
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